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Writing errorsThe general consensus is that an opening gambit is superfluously redundant January 13, 2007, Kuala Lumpur: Writers should cringe when they read or listen to one of their own coming up with a phrase such as “opening gambit”.This happened the other day when I heard a newsreader talking about a political figure making a move against his rival. A professional journalist should know better, or at least the editor who wrote the script. This is an example of redundancy, or superfluous words that are too common an occurrence in print, television and online. There are hundreds of redundant phrases doing the rounds in journalism and, to be fair, we are all vulnerable whether we are experienced writers or learning to write. A “gambit” is an opening move by someone against a rival that involves a sacrifice. Gambit implies first move, so to say “opening gambit” is ridiculous given you never read or hear about a “second gambit”. “Consensus” will always be general because the very word means a general agreement among members of a group or community. Still, you see “general consensus” being repeated in all forms of journalism by professionals who are obliged to treat their readers with more respect. Other obvious ones include: basic fundamentals, brief cameo, honest truth, local residents, mutual cooperation etc. Sneaky
ones, in my opinion
anyway, may be: empty space, common bond, new record, personal
belongings,
random chance and others. The
main thing is to think
about each word you write and make sure you are not repeating yourself. I’ve compiled an ebook with more than 150 common writing errors, available as a free bonus with “Secrets to how top pros write news”, which you can purchase by clicking here.
Email your comments to nazvi@newswriterspost.com. If you'd like to write something for posting, email as well, and I'll stick it in Your Shout. Please specify "comment" or "Your Shout". Keep it clean and politically correct please. You are, however, allowed to write negatively about motorists who drive at 80km/h (50mph) on the fast lane. Also, if anyone can show me how to put up those cool "post your comments" boxes, it'll be of great help. Nazvi Careem, Jan 13, 2007, Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia. |